Review my Poem? Falcon.?

This is so FREAKING BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!… I love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Not just anyone gets up and can write something like this!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! You were sooooo creative when you wrote this!!!! I; Used; To; Be; In; Love.... GREAT. And I like how you ended it saying "and now all i can offer is ..... Love. So it made sense lol!! it was good !!!!!!!!!!!