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Yea i agree with Cap, you dont have to do inners and multi's on every single line because the flow just kinda drags on and becomes boring. It seems you are just looking up words that rhyme which is forcing the rhymes. You are improving tho and flow comes with time trust me, it took me a couple of years to get the flow i have now. Just practice inserting inners and multis when you think its right, a rapper with good flow can switch it up from a crazy multi-syllabic inner rhyme infested bar to a good reliable one rhyme bar with ease.