The Blank Sestina reposted...c/c please?

Benny I have visited the rhymed version of the sestina first which I have read twice. I have also read this version twice. I still take my hat off to you for pursuing what I believe to be a difficult subject matter which requires a great deal of study to ensure that it is factually correct. Of the two versions, I prefer the rhyming one, but I am sure that won't come as a surprise to you, me being a love of rhyme. I am sure Peter will comment on the technical side of your work and provide you with the critique that I know you will want to see. You are a brave man choosing a subject matter which I consider to be difficult.